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I started to read and I had to look at the title again because I forgot what you were talking about. Good ideas though. It changes the way you think ...

Thanks for the review. I plan on using your suggestions when I get a chance to edit the exert. Thanks again and glad you liked it, i was hoping people ...

This is just the beginning exert that I wrote. There is much more to this chapter then this little bit, but this is what I have written confidently so far. ...

This is a recent story idea I came up with. The idea of the prologue is to just set up the story. It gives you a hint into the kind ...

peanutgallary007... Finished! Hope it helps!

Ok here I am. Just so you know I bolded parts in certain paragraphs and then explain them below which is also bolded. If something didn't bold right I apologize. ...

Hey everyone! I've recently been finding myself with some free time I figure that I would like to critique some work, but my computer is slow in loading recently so ...

wasn't bad. Uh I can't critique poems but you asked. I like the idea of like how it like summer then winter cause of the sun and the snow. Good ...

I used this poem as extra credit for my Language Arts class...enjoy! ___________________________________________________________________________________ Does the city sleep? Daylight brings noise and

I looked up some info on the rock village :) ____________________________________________ "Now!" Kuzon had met three guards at the edge of the village. One went to gather more ninja's, while ...

Kuzon- Walking along the outer border of the rock village Kuzon noticed a faint vibration that he had not felt before on his usual walk. Quickly stopping he focussed his ...

Ok I hope I remember everything if not I'll add on later... Name: Kuzon Gender: Male Village: Rock Village (I wanted to go out of the box even though I ...

When Nate gives his long speach right before they charge the noobs is like a total Lord of the Rings moment. Which is only one reason why I liked it. ...

I felt that this was very good. It does feel a little repetive but most lyrics do. It does seem as if you have two choruses: "just give me the ...

I liked the poem I thought it flowed well overall but there was one spot in the middle where it sounded a little awkward when read a loud (most likely ...