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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Bereft - This goodnight's kiss

    This poem has some stunning lyricism. However, that middle stanza to me, feels somewhat contrived. It also doesn't flow the same way as the rest of the poem. The rhythm ...

    May 12, 2006


We are discreet sheep; we wait to see how the drove is going, and then go with the drove.
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