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  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Humanity

    I think this poem was pretty good! However, it did have some downsides I didn't really connect too much with the poem it could use something to spice it up. ...

    Nov 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Say I Never Mattered

    Wow.....all I can say about this piece is wow. It was just truly magnificent I did notice a couple of grammar mistakes. Yet, it was still incredible I loved the ...

    Nov 22, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, General Re: Visions ; Introduction + Chapter One [PT1]

    This story was phenomenal, normally I don't usually read these types of genre stories but this work was incredible! It was a perfect mix of mystery and action! However, the ...

    Nov 22, 2016
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: Paradise on Earth

    I think this story was very interesting. But, I feel as if the message could have been more strong. Maybe find a way to show moral of the story without ...

    Nov 19, 2016


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— Homer Simpson