kathyloop

thanks. I oringally wrote this story 1st person, decided to change it, then now I"m going back. Thanks I will add something in there to tell they're underwater.

This is a good poem! I really enjoyed it but I do love rhyming poems that make sense too ! At first I thought it was aabout a boyfriend/girlfriend then ...

hey, this looked interesting so thought I'd review it. Please return the favor and review my chapter 1 "sirena".. I posted your post, but will put my comments in UPPERCASE! ...

hey, thanks! I completely forgot about this. This novel has been workedo n, left alone, worked on and thats why I found this site to help me out becasue Iget ...

My novel is in two parts, and this is not the location of the story..it's just the beginning...not sure what you mean by referring to the reader? I posted this ...