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  • Poetry » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Visions

    The title is vague and unlike the poem. But the poem is well written and emotional. The poem is easy to relate to. Fear and bravery is visible in the ...

    Apr 5, 2015


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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