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  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: Trapped In The Future Prologue

    Overall I quite like the pace/snappiness here, but part of me thinks a few more little details would help. Your first paragraph is great - the sense of this being ...

    May 5, 2015


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