katngo73

Oh. My. Gosh.

?????? I am very confused of your comment.... That huge quote isn't even mine.

Actually, this is a part of a novel..... here it is: Okay!!! ~kat

srry, I canceled that out because I forgot what I was going to say. Okay then! Some more writing is being prepared!

This is a really good poem. I like it. It just shows so much in so little words!!! That's why I like it so much. I hope you can write ...

Sorry, but it seems a bit weird, don't you think? Nothing is really explained WHY she is a "Bone" Queen. It sounds like she is a ghost than a "Bone" ...

Hey Cailey!!! This is a pretty good poem. Can't say I hate it, so I love it!! Great job!! No nitpicks for this one... I love the ending!! GREAT JOB ...

Okay, critique!!! 1. Try using stanzas, because I had a hard time separating them by topic. 2. This seems more like a paragraph to me, try and make it shorter. ...

Can't say I hate it!!! I love poems such as these. I'm not a great poet myself, but I think of this poem, Daydream, as a fantastic role model for ...

I really like this poem. It's just the first stanza and the second line. it seems sort of awkward to have a really long line while the others are super ...

i'm loving it, Cailey!!!! haha. But what I don't understand is the title. It doesn't relate to the story much. Still, you should've entered it in!!! It's such a good ...

:O my jaw just dropped open on that one. Haha, it's still ooooopen!!!! anyways. I love that. That's all I can say GREAT JOB AND KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!! Lotsa love, ~Kat

sure! I love the first chapter anyways. So yes, I will review, ON REVIEW DAY!!!! :D ~Kat

Well, yes, there were only some parts that I knew of in my generation because I try to speak to my Grandpa in Vietnamese. And it's hard to since English ...

Wow, I think I will help u with that: 1.Katrina 2. Seth and then, Melissa 3. 2400 or maybe The Tactician 4. Sun Tzu 5. Amanda 6. The Attack of ...