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Traffic screamed along the surrounding labyrinth of roads in the morning rush to work as I walked along the sidewalk. It was a bright fall day, sunlight streaming through the ...

Love this idea, but it doesn't quite feel finished. You could elaborate on Henry's childhood to strengthen the emotional impact - this piece has a lot of potential!

Great idea, and the narrative drive is excellent! Very well written, although it does get a little confusing at the end - perhaps a stronger conclusion? Its clear that an ...

Great short story and concept, even if it is inspired by a game! The description is perhaps a little confusing in places, but the bodies scene is excellent, the lack ...