keeperofgaming

Yay. I'm happy it went over well

I know, that's why I clarified since poetry is in the eye of the beholder.

Thanks so much

also, would you please be able to review the 3rd chapter of the Prime control?

Just to add something here, the Adventurers guild is an independent entity from nations, so something like the attempted enslaving is far more shocking to the people.

You pretty much summarized Asura, good job

The idea I was trying to portray is basically someone going in circles trying to explain to themselves who they are.

Not gonna lie, I was not thinking Macbeth, though it may have been because I wrote it in english class right after reading part of Macbeth.

Thank you

Thanks and that was good.

Thank you, I had fun writing it.

Nice, btw I just made a poem about this story if you want to read it. It's called, "The Eighth Sibling"

Thank you for the review. I always love reading them.

Cool. I see the vision now

The stars are golden. It's beauty can't be tracked. This poem demonstrates that in a simple and meaningful way. It's a really well done, short poem.