keirab

Wow, this was...exciting. Very different. This is the first "mutts" story I read and I must say I like it! You had me at the second paragraph when it mentions ...

Immediately after the words leave her tongue, she regrets them. Damn! She has made a terrible mistake. You changed perspective for a second there. =P This is pretty cool. I ...

Wow. That was amazing. Disturbing, but...wow.

Wow. This was very good! Very effective and emotional. And I think the rhyming works very well.

I like this, good voice, very honest and realistic. Sharp and funny. I'm looking forward to reading more entries!

Wow...that's all I have to say. Just.....wow.

Hehehehe very funny that made me laugh!!...Definitely not PC lol but very funny!!! I love it!

I liked this poem. The flow was good, it rhymed but not to an exaggerated, silly extent. Very good rhythm! I just love this line: Autumn’s ill-chanced just born leaves ...

Good poem, I liked the emotions displayed, but it was a little awkwardly written. Could have been a little smoother. But other than that, good poem!

I really liked this poem! I had some questions at first about what it was supposed to mean but when you explained it in your post it all made sense. ...

This was funny and charming, very pleasant to read. You have a great way with dialogue! Keep it up! I'd like to read more! :D

Thanks! :D

that was really good! Very touching...