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  • Other Poetry Re: Light of the Fire.

    The fire burns, Throwing flames about. They lick the blackness, stretching long, fiery tongues, And with them, illuminate the night. With the fire, comes the threat of scorching. But also ...

    Jan 26, 2012
  • Other Poetry Re: Truth

    I know it’s not what he wants to hear, But he needs to know he’s not alone. I tell him my story, letting my opinions Run naked into the cool ...

    Jan 24, 2012


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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