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it's good but a little un-likely...I don't know what's happened to the father...but if he's not there then it would be unlikely that a small girl would be able to ...

I don't know if this is supposed to be funny...but it is....what was it: "so dad, did they get the spinx?" "no, they only got the nose." !!!!!!!!!! That is ...

English isn't your first language? Wow! You put my writing to shame and It is my native language! every1 else seems to have done a grammer check...I won't bore you ...

Okay..this is my view on what youv'e written...which is actually really good: there's just some things I'd change! Prologue ~ Burned I was crying, [s]a small child of just seven ...