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I Just Called to Say I love You
I just wrote this a few minutes ago. Please read it and tell me what you think and what I could improve! I JUST CALLED TO SAY I LOVE YOU ...
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The Last Laugh
Let me know what you guys think!! THE LAST LAUGH Emily smirked at the boy in front of her as he stuttered for the words to say. “Admit it, Evan,” ...
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Death at a Funeral
Please critique and tell me what I can improve! Adrian stared into her grandfather’s casket with mixed emotions. Grief filled her soul, but she didn’t cry. Everybody around her cried, ...