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Hey Lance, firstly, welcome to YWS. This is really good for a first post. I thought that it was well thought and had good description. I just think that if ...

Hey. This was a really good poem. I thought it was in depth and that it was also written really well. But the rhythm in places wasn't the best. I ...

Hey. First off, I have to say that I thought that you thought of a really good theme for this poem. I thought that it started off really well, and ...

Hey. Here for the review... But I also got a really good read. I thought that this poem was really good. I thought that it flowed really well, and it ...

Hey. I thought that this poem was quite good. My personal opinion, is that grammar and capitalized letters are the author's choice for a poem, and that the repetition of ...

Hey. When I saw the title, I thought that it was going to be different. But I thought that this was really good. I thought that it was well thought ...

Hey Coter. As I said, I don't like reviewing Haiku's but I'm doing it anyway. I thought that this was rather good. Haiku's aren't that easy to do, but I ...

Hey ROC. First of, I have to say, I really don't like reviewing haiku's. Please don't ask me why, I just don't. But here is my attempt at it... Seeing ...

Hey KAH. I'm sorry, but because I have no originality, I'm going to do this the way I usually do. I really liked this poem. I liked the idea of ...

Hey. I thought this was really good. I thought it flowed well, with a really good rhythm. I also thought that it's rhyming scheme was really good. It didn't seem ...

Hey. First off, I want to say that I think that this is really good. I just thinks it needs to be expanded on. I think it being not capitalized ...

Hey. I just want to say, that I don't usually review novels. (Mainly because I'm not that good at both reviewing and writing them.) But here is my attempt. I ...

Hey. I thought this was a little short. I think it can be extended on a fair bit. It seems more like an idea rather than a poem like this. ...

Hey. Firstly, I don't usually read things based on current stories because I like originality. But I guess you got there with that. So this is what I thought. At ...

Hey. I thought it was really good, except for the structure. It was meaningful and it had really good imagery, but I think it should be more structured like this. ...