kitrosemon13

love is a rollercoaster(: thank you for the review though.

Sorry about the confusion, I should have put in there that my PC shut down on further writing of mine for my work on this. So sorry about that, I've ...

Thank you to all who reviewed this, you all helped a lot.

Thank you to all who reviewed this! (:

Gay means happy, gayish (happy)

Thanks and no problem, I've been busy as well. I haven't even had enough time to writer another chapter.

Welcome the way I read it came off a negative, but to make this easier I suggest we both should stop bickering over this. Or I should stop, either way, ...

Thank you, and I have never heard of any of those songs though.

To KatTrain. Wow, I guess no one can see the meaning of poetry. When I wrote this it didn't come out of the blue. That was just a true attack ...

I'm working on new chapters now, I'm going to add about two or three more chapters onto it. (:

It was probably confusing because you didn't read the other chapters. They will most likely answer your other questions.

Also I can see that you said that you wrote this like you wanted I was just showing how it could have looked. Keep writing!

10/10 as said above me. Wow. I'm sure you spent a while writing this but I loved it. It's like the bible in a personal viewers eyes. Keep writing!

I honestly love your writing, I didn't find anything wrong with this much, just punctuation problems I'm sure you can figure out on your own. Keep up the good work ...

I wrote this so it could be like a timeline, from the ice ages-world war one (or) two- and to modern day. (: