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Hello, Silent Rain! First of all, I am no poet, and of course I know I have made mistakes, but I think there are some things that you may have ...

Hi Pink! Thanks for your review! I've corrected the mistakes that you mentioned, I hope there isn't much more left :). As for the descriptions, the story continues in Sunshine ...

Hi Megsug! Thanks for your review! I've tried to make the story more understandable by adding a few lines here and there, and of course tried to correct the mistakes ...