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hi, this is Kman134 with a review for your poem. At first, i didn't get what you were implying on this poem, but after reading it a second time, i ...

hi, this is Kman134, here, to review your work. this is a somewhat cold and dark poem; its like it's explaining us the wait for the sweet bliss of death ...

hi, this is kman134, here and i'm here to review. all-in-all, this is a pretty romantic, yet dramatic, song; the lyres were deep and well-written and the grammar is pretty ...

Hello there, this is Kman134, here, I am here to review your story. First of all, this is a pretty good story; the dialogue was brilliant, the characters were well-developed ...

Hi, my name is kman134 and I'm here to review your work. i love how you discuss the idea of apologies; i loved how you pointed out whether you should ...

Hi, this is Kman134, and I'm here to review your work. First off, this poem was somewhat interesting; i love the use of symbolisms inside of it. "I have achieved ...

Hey, this is Kman134 and I'm here to review your work. firstly, some of the sentences within your poem were a bit long, especially the third sentence. "The only thing ...

Hi, my name is Kman134 and I am here to review your short poem today. Well, here's what I think of the second stanza: "They were beautiful implosions in miniature ...

Hey, Lightsong, this is Kman134! I'm here to review your work! So, far, I'm enjoying this poem. Like the theme that's going on here; the sentences in the stanzas are ...

I like this poem. I love how it emphasizes the feeling of pessimism and nihilism within each part. I love how you used the "Leviathan" to symbolize your obsession with ...

This poem was very morbid and a little confusing, but i might have gotten some aspects of the message; if there wasn't any message, then i could say it was ...

This was a somewhat depressing poem, especially the title "The Sky is Dead". This part was what intrigued me the most: "The moon's blood red And the sky is dead. ...

I love "Seraph no Owari" and I loved how you turned the ending of the anime into a poem. It definitely emphasizes Yuichiro and his entire childhood before becoming a ...

This was a very interesting, yet entertaining, piece. although i did find the grammar a little bit hard to understand, making it difficult to follow. like when you put, "When ...

This is very interesting, I have to say. This poem shows so much details on the human psyche as it descends into madness. It's so descriptive and original like an ...