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This is so cute. The rhyming scheme is really nice and I enjoy it. I especially enjoyed how you compared snow to sand. I would have never put those two ...

I love the fact that you used so much description and figurative language. This poem is something that I can relate to and I enjoyed it.

Blank Page A blank page is daunting Like starring down a gun's barrel It makes your heart flutter And your mind race You can visualize the words Inky words that ...

Ugh, writer's block. The only thing that I hate more than sunshine and puppies...just kidding. I really like this poem because it expesses your annoyance with it because unfortunaely it ...

I love this series. James Patterson is a god when it comes to making the Maximum Ride books. This book was much better than the fifth book in the Maximum ...

I read the first and the second book of this series ("The Recruit" and "The Dealer") and I have to say that I thoroughly enjoyed the series so far. There ...

I enjoyed this poem because you touch on everything that it is to be a writer. I totally agree with you. On the other side of things, I didn't quite ...

The metaphor for this poem is not only true but it is very vivid. This poem hits home for a lot of people including myself. We all have been in ...

I enjoyed this poem due to the vivid imagery and the flow of the piece. I can sit and imagine this flower that seem to sit in the moonlight. Absolutely ...

When you look at the metaphorical meaning of this poem it hits you deep down in your soul and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I especially enjoy the fact that you ...

Oooo I sense a problem with this new character Jimmy. Maybe some conflict with him and Tony in the future. Keep up the good work Spitfire. You've hooked me on ...

I did enjoy this and I swear that the way you wrote this made it sound like high school all over again. I love the main character Crys and I ...

This chapter had me glued to the edge of m seat waiting to figure out who or what this girl is and why the main character passed out when he ...

Your prologue was very well done and it made me cry for more. It was very well laid out and now I really want to find out who this werewolf ...

Blank Page A blank page is daunting Like starring down a gun's barrel It makes your heart flutter And your mind race You can visualize the words Inky words that ...