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Something about this poem, sits very well with me. It has a very charming innocence that is not hammered home again and again - which so many poems do; to ...

I rather like this poem, even though i have an aversion to longer poems :P The subject matter was very appealing and it really amused me. More so given the ...

Firstly: WELCOME TO YWS! woop! i hope you enjoy it here. Secondly: I liked your poem quite a bit, it had a lot of emotional investment; which really came through ...

what i like particularly was your correct use of arcane lexis :D and spelling "bourne", - swish. Depth indeed, for your poem's namesake is correct! :D very deep indeed. All ...

WOW! a bit of an experiment? :P I must say this poem is FANTASTIC. it was all just so visceral and sumptuous. I am really very impressed. Many people might ...

Is this a Haiku? 'cos the beat is meant to be 5/7/5 - this poem is 6/9/3. Other than my fiendish nit-picking :P I really liked this poem/haiku? I don't ...

This poem is very hard to read :S i couldn't make head'nor'tail of it! :S sorry. It is all down to the structure. Try to sort that out and, i ...

OK firstly! I can see that you are new, so welcome :D Secondly: The poem over all was pretty good. It had a definite, confident rhythm - which only broke ...

I thought that this poem was very well constructed. I indeed, enjoyed the clever structure, with the 3 line stanzas. ^^ I also appreciated the half-rhymes. Like "stone" and "shown" ...

What's the crack then? eh? |Right lets get to it. Swish poetry! This was brilliant. I can clearly relate to the message within this poem. We have all had that ...

Was tune and persecution , meant to be a kind of para-rhyme? Because it read as if it was. If so. YAY! :D A very sweet, subtle poem. I really ...

Well, one thing is for certain. You know how to write a poem well. for this - Kudos! :D *and my rarely seen tridecatople thumbs up*. However...the poem started out ...

I am not entirely sure, of what i think about this poem. Every fibre of my being, says no...but some obscure nymph; lurking in the depths of my mind says ...

ooooh my!! my oh my! how very spicy. sounds, somewhat bitter. But, forgive me. I am easily side-tracked. (my idle mind - serves me right for shopping at Tesco for ...

I liked this poem. It was not enough to make me wet myself. However, a pleasent read none the less. My advice...hmm, well. The best advice i can give to ...