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Re: Blank, Chapter one *edit*
Well I had sort of a hard time reading it so i think you should space it out a tiny bit,Especially during the dialogue. Like this... This is based on ...
May 25, 2010 -
Re: Into the Depths Chapter 1 [Reworked]
Greetings Ellie!! I love how with every word i read i had a vivid picture of everything happening. You writing has this certain charisma that just kept me reading and ...
May 25, 2010 -
Re: new story - no title
That was just Exquisite! I can literally read all of the thought you put into that. I find British Styled writing so amazing! I mean the things that are done ...
May 25, 2010 -
Re: Poets are
Well I loved it!Well the idea mostly. I saw all of the Irony!The whole thing was ironic to me the structure the mistakes!! I thought it was intentional. As i ...
May 25, 2010