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and so there was darkness in me ii. then came resurrection, endless - 10.5 (fin: 11:55 pm) for a living never mines to hold / and soiled deep my grief ...

and so there was darkness in me - 10/4 (11:40 pm) everlasting light entombed me / this river goodness blossomed then / calloused my healing hands / burnt until my ...

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your poetry expresses emotion and passion so wonderfully through metaphors & similes (ex: i falter, like damp wood, split. / i float out, useless.), and imagery (she searches for that ...

4.30. restless things even in my sleep i'm wide awake; breathe in the curiosity of wild comets, feel burns of a thousand fleeing dreams on my skin. smashed gnats bleed ...

4.29. so it rains again the rain hushed for a shallow breath unraveled from the chest, at last to feel itself exist in summer heat, in spring's wake. it seems ...

the way these poems start gradually shifting away from the previous established beginning, for the thread to unravel itself, is brilliant! love how the voice shift in the most recent ...

4.28. float hands above to feel / arms reach to plunge into air. wrists bond to leap / fingers sewn blurs, like fairies themselves are the secret. mountains my back ...

i love these metaphors built in poem 2 & 3 that connect each other so seamlessly! while the second poem feels as if the speaker is somewhat observational of themselves, ...

4.27 wash me (dry) things will always keep happening. keep thrown stones   clean-cut dry through waterfalls; life doesn't halt for water. things move: on my body, fuzz on the rag, ...

you've been doing well when it comes to being dedicated to napo while remembering to take time to rest for yourself (which is always good--napo can be stressing if there's ...

the poem "seems like old times", for me, is one of the top poems here that stands out the most. it has such a soft meaning, with powerful imagery and ...