lalalucky

these poems so interesting, and lovely to read! i love the metaphors scattered through your poetry, especially how very particular they can be (ex: "the purr of his voice / ...

your poetry is so written beautifully! it's endearing how so honest they are; being so grounded while making the mundane seem more profound or have a hidden deep meaning ("everything ...

2nd submission: "impossibilities"

4.11 impossibilities that arch meeting your waist, holding two pieces of yourself together: could it bear roots, create deeper fissures to trace? are these crevices: skin-wrapped depths in my back, ...

4.10. what does the sunlight feel like? it feels like light.    what does light feel like? it feels like warmth.    what does warmth feel like? it feels like thousands of ...

these poems have been a splendid read! i find the voice brooding, actively trying to teach or guide the reader while also sharing a personal experience. on the most recent ...

4.9. don't mind me, good stranger online just blowing off steam with sweaty fingers tipping off feelings with a hiss from the letters on keys of a board slammed against ...

I said, I am not like them. I said, I still remember how to love. my goodness, this was a beautifully written narrative poem. i love how the overall length ...

4.08 you write a million poems a thousand bad poems in-between you picked to infest an oyster's belly to create sweet wine out of rot. dozens of inches grow at ...

the usage of archaic language & tone makes your poetry so distinct! while the archaic language & tone has been apart of poetry for centuries that's kind of died out ...

(4.07 / finished 11:19 pm ) lost & found these ragged nails crippled by ample water, flimsy and loosely molded by pressure, can't sail boats on ripples in soaked skin ...

so far your poems has been lovely to read! this tenderness of the first, introductory poem is so endearing! the idea that even when the speaker chooses to not possess ...

hi fig this is definitely not an in-depth comment considering the amounts of thought you put into this thread, but reading this as a reader who doesn't have this much ...

[tw ref self-harm and abuse] 4.6. restless night(&day) something i said (or thought) drawn quick as a breath in & out, this body's gone slack, sloping, slipping— through my conscious ...

ah!! i'm flattered you took the recommendation to heart, and i'm glad you seem to be liking it! i'm also very happy to hear that it incited a journey for ...