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larnise

  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Journey of the American Hero

    I'm sorry, but it's so long, I didn't read all of it. I stopped when you said that Anne Bradstreet was the first known female author. That's not true. I ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: I'm Trying To Believe

    This is very good, I'm impressed. It's very to the point, and yet gives a lot of detail as to what's going on in her life. You're a very good ...

    Nov 2, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: "Romance in arena"

    Interesting, I would love to read the rest of it, if there is more. It's a very good storyline, and the wording of the characters is magnificent. Keep up the ...

    Nov 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Live A Lie

    Hey, I think that you actually hit the dot on that one. The world really is like that. I did not see any grammar problems or spelling problems. However, it ...

    Nov 2, 2011


pain is that feeling when you are feeling hurt, but it never goes away leaving me hurt. oh it hurts.
— Dragonthorn