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  • Lyric Poetry Re: Where is God?

    I like this, are you saying how can we just sit here and watch this and be the children of God. Because I think that too. I like this poem ...

    Mar 17, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Tea Time

    I loved this poem but what is it about? Don't get me wrong I usually understand poetry, but this was sort of hard to grasp. I liked the descriptions and ...

    Mar 17, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A Lesson in Dying

    This poem strikes me as really sad and depressing. To me. I don't usually review these types of poems, but this one is good. Because it is descriptive and I ...

    Mar 17, 2011
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    Mar 17, 2011
  • Other Re: Don't get me started on...Pop.

    Oh my gosh, I never actually thought of pop music like that. The songwriting part yes, because I want to be a songwriter. But, this really gives you a totally ...

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Empty Mind

    I love this poem. My favorite parts are when you said " Ample thoughts are now just steam" And when you also wrote" Not a lonesome world escapes this shallow ...

    Mar 16, 2011
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    This is about when you deny all you stand up for just to please other people.

    Mar 16, 2011
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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Breaking

    I like the part when you wrote your lies don't shape my world. I am going to press the like button on this and for this being your first post, ...

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Maybe I Write

    I really like this poem and I am going to press the like button. I like the words that you placed in the stanzas and the way you wrote them. ...

    Mar 16, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: I'll Buy My Own Roses

    I like the way she stormed in and then said what she said, I can't say it or type it. I really liked the beginning of it when you said ...

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Grammatical Error?

    I really like this poem, I really love the part when you said I Be Me. It was a daring letter of independence. I really liked it, I think that ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: When Nothing Else Matters

    I love this poem and I like the part you wrote about opening your eyes to worlds that have been blind, I think. But, yeah I really liked this poem ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Sollicitus Intus - "Anxious Within"

    I like this poem, I like the descriptions in it. I didn't quite understand it, though. What is the motive of the poem and where did you get the idea ...

    Mar 15, 2011


A beautiful funeral doesn't guarantee Heaven.
— Haitian Proverb