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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Above the Lake

    I like this poem. really, I had no idea there was a like button but I am going to press it. I like the description and the nature in this ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Keep Moving

    It wasn't too painful to read but it was sad. I am not good on harsh reviews but it could do with more rhymes and more lines. I really like ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: You and Me

    Oh I really like this poem. What is the inspiration for it? It is really poetic and nice and it has a nice rhythm sort of like song lyrics. I ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Colors

    This poem is really good, and I hope you guys win. I really think that the last three, umm, stanzas are the best. As far as my poetic eyes can ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: The song of my life

    I like these lyrics, the song of my life. You should really make it into a real song. Like, does it have a rhythm? Because I am sure with the ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: That Sacred Slut

    It is really sad and the mood of the poem is dark. but it is definitely poetic. And I don't usually review this type of poems so I don't really ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: Guardians At Night

    I haven't dealt with the loss of a person only the loss of a pet. And I held that pet dearly to my heart. He was the best, and I ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Serenity in Neutrality

    I like this poem, really good. It is sort of a riddle, but I like it. You should explain it farther, though and make it a little simpler because I ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: there she inscribed

    What is this poem about?? it is very descriptive and I like it. but what is it about? The moral, the motive and lastly where did you get the idea ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Seperation

    I really like this poem, it deals with separation. I haven't dealt in that situation before. I have experienced the death of a pet, but not separation from a friend. ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Japan

    I love this poem, it really describes what they must have went through. I saw it on the news, it was really sad. I can't imagine myself there, in that ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Park Bench Pageant

    Is this about littering? I am so guilty of littering. Really, sometimes I can't help it or I don't want to walk to the nearest trash can. Which might be ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Sanity vs. Love

    It was really catchy, like song lyrics. I liked it, actually. Good choice of wording and rhymes and rhythm. Because those are the biggest things when writing, and the hardest ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Hey, Mother.

    I thought it was a vampire poem. It was actually made feel queezy. And the descriptions were so good I feel like I am going to throw up. No lie, ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Black and White?

    I like the one that says external on it, it is really pretty. Is the girl a fairy or something else. I try to understand art.

    Mar 15, 2011


Maybe what most people wanted wasn't immortality and fame, but the reassurance that their existence had meant something. No matter how long... or how brief. Maybe being eternal meant becoming a story worth telling.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Nectar of Immortality