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  • Narrative Poetry Re: They Paved the Way

    They Paved the Way They came with shovels Driven, fortuitous, and strong Forward they must go Working, working, working A man’s game; a woman’s game Clad with rags and calluses ...

    Mar 13, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Winds of Change

    Overall I did like your poem, specifically the tone and rythm. However, develop some powerful images for the audience to latch onto, so that there is a real feeling between ...

    Mar 13, 2010


The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price