lexieells

Thanks so much for all the reviews and likes guys!! Im so honored to have this piece be a freatured work! Keep the reviews coming! Crtique always welcome! -Lexi:)

I liked it a lot. The idea of it. I do think you should finish it though. Good start. -Lexi

I do, genuinely, appreciate your critisisim. However, though some parts of your response are completely right and partly due to my lack of expierence, I have to disagree with one ...

thanks so much for your support and suggestions. i consider each and every one of them. what do you guys think about the edit?? lemme knoww!! _Lexi

thanks, you helped. and you were right about "cease"...sorry about that...but i am aslo quite wiped. thats where most of my mistakes came from. ill fix them. thanks a bunch! ...

it was, in fact, a very unique way of describing something sensual. It allowe the reader to understand and invision the scene to there own liking. It was sexual but ...