lexy

Emotional...... and the imagery is powerful. The reptition of the word "glow" is a little boring but I'm sure you can think of an alternative word? Well done, I'm printing ...

welcome xxxxxx

chapter eight it is then......

the above comment is true! 7...............

and then there was six ............................

Chapter five (god how many are there???) lexy x

the character sounds like a modern character personality wise. What era is this in??? straight to chapter 4 now xx

on to chapter 3!!!!!!!!!!

i'm going straight to chapter 2 !!! xxxx

It was good. The way you made a character and portrayed both side to her. Good stuff.

I liked this. We did stream of conciousness at school.... Its good! xxxx

This disney song has got to be THE BEST! Song: A Whole New World Lyrics (Aladdin:) I can show you the world Shining, shimmering, splendid Tell me, princess, now when ...

i love autumn too. The crispy orange leaves... love crunching them under my feet. Anyway, Great imagery. Made me all warm and fuzzy :D *hug for your great work!* lexy ...

I like a bit of relationship romance. Its really sweet. Would have liked to see more of it though :cry: *hugs for your great effort* Lexy x

At last some chick flick poetry!!! I like this! Its a good simple issue right at the centre of a poem which flows really well. I can relate to this ...