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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Hazel- chapter 1

    Hey Sakuragirl1, In her library, there were books that spoke of Tonan women who never cut their hair, and their's was never this long in the pictures. I feel like ...

    Nov 9, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Memory

    Dear idraax, It was a good short story, but I feel as if it didn't flow smoothly in some areas. I am also curious why Sharetha accompanied Adros. She just ...

    Nov 5, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Hazel-prologe *Edited*

    Dear Sakuragirl1, I very much liked the pro-log to your story and the names you chose are very unique. I think it would be helpful if you told more about ...

    Nov 3, 2010


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