lilbluejay

Wow that was suspensful. I don't think I can fix any grammer. But I think it would be good to explain or to take out the part of you being ...

I loved this, it had its own way of flowing together, the one thing I would change is the part when it says "Fun guests" I just don't think it ...

Great Poem, i loved the way that you wrote this having each word flow into the next. The one thing to change is not to use big words in such ...

it was a good poem, i think that when you right something, re-read it 10 times or so, to see what types of words you can change to make it ...