lillizard

Thank you for critiquing this, Treecub. However, I made a pronunciation guide, although I haven't posted it yet. His name, with the little accent mark (yes, there is a reson ...

Zank you. Zank you. Zank you very very much. I'm changing like half of my poem. But, bubbles, I think I'm still going to keep the: oh me, oh my. ...

Dont mind lillizard, I think he's been taking grumpy pills You're taking grumpy pills! =P But unfortunately losing the grammar gives your poem an amateurish feel and makes it obvious ...

Nice job! The last stanza I thought was the strongest. A combination of nice ryhming, and rythm. However, as previously mentioned, the first stanza was not the best one to ...

Ah, but that's what chapter 4 is four. I mean, for.

I copied and pasted it from word perfect, meaning it showed up in this hideous, tragic form! AHHHH! I usually put a link into this after I add a new ...

This poem is awesome. Very nice metaphors, I really liked it. Also, like they said, the flow could use a boost. Just take out a couple of words here or ...

Hello? Anyone there? I'm knocking but nobody's answering. Ah, well...

Three words: best. children's. writer. I have never read a children's book that has such a good combo of wittiness, flow, and plots than Roahld Dahl. Also, I think he ...

Thanks, guys. I'll due some major editations tonight.

oops... Sorry, didn't meen to double post, I'll get rid of the other one.

It's my story Lycan, not yours. Besides, if you want to hear the story unravel a bit, you're going to have to wait. Besides, I am going to work on ...

p.s. I am not lazy, I am busy with other things. Like advanced math courses and book club. Don't just call me lazy because I don't post all of my ...

Lycan, listen. You are being pretty impatient. Now, I will answer your questions. 1.) If you would look at my blog, you might realize that this is not a book ...

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