lilyhawk

You have a great way with words. With the first sentence I would use a different word than the familiar, your wording is elegant but I think some meaning is ...

This is beautiful. At the beginning I was a little lost, but the more that I read the more I understood, so that was a great lead in. When you ...

I really like how you did not reveal he works for her father until the end. It seems sad and haunted but a story almost all can relate to. I ...