lilyjacobs

THanks for the review. A little response, showers were painful emotionally. She doesn't like remembering how she got those scars. And also this story is based off of a true ...

Damn! And well done! Did not expect that twist right there. But its pretty amazing so far. Keep writing. I wanna see what happens with them.

Thanks! I do notice those weak spots and I appreciate you actually reading it like an editor. I've posted the story on other sites and all I get are, 'good ...

Wow, this is really very good. I liked the time changes, though it was a bit confusing in the beginning. I would love to read more.

I read through this chapter and its great! A little confusing at times and I do wish that at certain moments you would take more time to describe the scene, ...