limegreenleopard

Hey -I like it! It's deinitely not too depressing - I think that's good, because the feeling behind it is nice and strong, it feels like it's always there. I ...

.............................. Wow! That was brillaint! I loved... everything but esepcially... Feeling: You really made me feel something with this piece. There was real emotion and power, and if any

Hey this is Leopard reviewing for you. First of all, i'd like to say how much I like this work. Great job. :D Now, here's some things you could imprve. ...

So I read it, as you asked, and really enjoyed it, more than the first one! Keep writing them and I'll keep reading them, definitely! Everytime I read an entry, ...

Hi I'm Leopard and I'm going to be your reviewer today! Reading the poem gave me a good feeling and I'm going to list the things that I liked. :D ...

Liked it! You definitely had a good lot of reasons why your points were true and I found myself believing what you had said as I read on. I really ...

Hi this is Leopard and I'm here to review you work! I’ve been having these dreams about a boy who never sleeps. About the end of times as we know ...

It's definitely a good and orginal idea for Callen, I like it in that way. But in other ways it's actually rather mad. You haven't used a new line every ...

....... That is so horrible... But so amazingly brillaint and well written! I congratulate you! :D Wow. I was so moved by the story. It's so sad! But spooky! I...I ...

Wow! You have made a really big impact on me here, so congratulations. Immediately I can say it is very striking, and that you are a very gifted writer. I've ...

In a way, it was quite a general, average sort of story. I think, if you expanded it so it had more of a plot and a meaning, I would ...

I liked it, alot. :D I think it's really good, and in a way, the feeling at the end makes you wonder what is going to happen afterwards, if anything. ...

Yeah, I was going to mention the paragraphs thing as it's hard to read it as it is. Concering the story, I think it's well written and I especially like ...

Wow! This poem is really cool. It reminds me of a friend I have who has a really unsual name :D. it's a really interesting thing to get your teeth ...

This is really cool. The little girl's thoughts are really cute, especially with the grammar thing :D ! Overall, I liked it alot, and can't really think of anything you ...