liquiddeath

I like it, it really reeled me in. I think its a great start although u didn't say much about the battle with the demon u kinda ended it fast ...

Wow thanks man this will really help me out, I'll try to use better colour combinations next time. As i said before I'm kinda a newbie right now but I'll ...

I'm kinda new to all this poem writing and story writing but i joined this community to develop my writing skills so Thanks for the feedback I'll defiantly try harder ...