littlefirefly73

heya! I have some feedback for your story (please don't take it personally, I'm hoping to help you improve your work!) - these characters seem too extreme. it sounds as ...

heya, I'm coming from your previous part for another review! once again, I enjoyed reading your work! here's some feedback I'd like to offer: - I feel as though the ...

hey there! this is a very interesting piece! I just have to say that I'm a bit overwhelmed with all the information in such a short part. perhaps you could ...

this is really interesting! I love your detailed explanations, especially at the beginning with that haunting song. I could picture it well in my head, echoing down those hallways. gave ...