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I love it! I thought it was kind of ironic how you switched my part and marys part around =P shes known you longer maybe that means you and i ...

Dear Psouth, I love the dialog of both chapters. I also love how you switch from one characters view to the others. I like it when Shawn finds his locker ...

i didn't like it at all. i'm not a big fan of harry potter on a regular basis but i didn't see what the point of that was. it didn't ...

yeah yeah yeah. i wanted the cardinals to win. the steelers have already been to enough superbowls! give someone else a chance! this was the first football game i've actually ...

hey hey. I liked it but I think you should take out some of the nows and move the lines after the semicolons to a new line. It would probably ...

I love the emotion. I found a few mistakes, but those can be easily changed. I have so many friends who relate to that perfectly and I was holding back ...

I like it a lot! You should really finish it soon! But try to put more details into what the characters are like. We don't know too much about what ...

I love the emotion you put into the lyrics. I actually like how it rhymes. It has meaning and is the type that would grab anybody's attention whether they hear ...

Hey hey sista! I know you were talking about me as her best friend! lol. anyways i loved it a lot. it explains how life is for a lot of ...

I love it!!! woohoo!!!! i like the emotion you put into it. i like the free verse in it. it would work with the stanzas also but i like how ...

I love how the words painted a picture in my head as I read your poem. The words you used were fantastic. I didn't really notice many grammar errors so ...

I like this a lot but you shouldn't have used the word seem twice within the first couple lines. It take away from the poems potential but other than that ...