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I love it! I thought it was kind of ironic how you switched my part and marys part around =P shes known you longer maybe that means you and i ...

Dear Psouth, I love the dialog of both chapters. I also love how you switch from one characters view to the others. I like it when Shawn finds his locker ...

i didn't like it at all. i'm not a big fan of harry potter on a regular basis but i didn't see what the point of that was. it didn't ...

hey hey. I liked it but I think you should take out some of the nows and move the lines after the semicolons to a new line. It would probably ...

I love the emotion. I found a few mistakes, but those can be easily changed. I have so many friends who relate to that perfectly and I was holding back ...

I love the emotion you put into the lyrics. I actually like how it rhymes. It has meaning and is the type that would grab anybody's attention whether they hear ...