live.laugh.love

I like it a lot! You should really finish it soon! But try to put more details into what the characters are like. We don't know too much about what ...

Hey hey sista! I know you were talking about me as her best friend! lol. anyways i loved it a lot. it explains how life is for a lot of ...

I love it!!! woohoo!!!! i like the emotion you put into it. i like the free verse in it. it would work with the stanzas also but i like how ...

I love how the words painted a picture in my head as I read your poem. The words you used were fantastic. I didn't really notice many grammar errors so ...

I like this a lot but you shouldn't have used the word seem twice within the first couple lines. It take away from the poems potential but other than that ...