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thanks so much for the review!

thanks Bookwolf! I'm definitely gonna look at the ending, it means a lot that you liked the rest though.

I really love what you've done here! Honestly, I'm not a huge fan of Haiku's, aside from when I randomly bust them out last second in order to not fail ...

I'm sorry, I wasn't trying to be insulting or rude in any way. I believe that you can just click edit and delete the work if you wish to. I ...

I'm not sure if this is really a piece of work. I know I, and most other people on this site, would appreciate it if you refrained from posting things ...

I can't even express how amazing this is

Wow, Thank you so much for the comment. I disagree with most of your points, I'm not saying this is an amazing poem. I know it can use a lot ...

Thanks a lot! I really appreciate the review and it does help. Honestly, when I was writing this poem it was really late at night and I was just bored ...

yah, I've clicked twice before and it did that, but this time I promise i only hit it once! thanks for the advice though :D

sorry, I don't know why that posted twice. I think my internet service is just insanely messed up. Sorry about that!

I think that this is a great poem! I know that this is eight years to late to be reviewing this, but this was the oldest poem I could find ...

sorry, I have no idea why that went through twice. I promise you I only pressed submit once! It only counted it as one review for me though, so not ...

Yah, I really hate spelling also, whenever I write something, so many of the words are spelled wrong. Haha, your poem really is amazing though!

I really love this poem and think that you worded it greatly! One small thing that I noticed, on the third line of the first stanza, the word life is ...

I think that this is a great poem! I like the way you wrote it, it is very different and interesting. Although it is a little confusing, I still thought ...