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Re: To Leave Tyler is to do What With my Life? [EDITED]
She was freaking USING HIM!!! i HATE her!! Tyler's so niiiice. He looooves her. Doesn't she love him? Whats wrong? Why does she HAVE to leave? I don't like this ...
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: The Love Note (Chapter Two, Heavily Edited)
I really like this story line. It's a great idea. I wish i had thought of it! Well, all your mistakes were pointed out. All I can say is write ...
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: He Comes Before Night: Chapter Three
I thought this was good. There was a part at the top that I mainly noticed. Challenging her to look away , anything.... I hope the quote things work. All ...
Dec 15, 2008 -
Re: Forever chapter 4
hey. This is pretty much a copy of Twilight. Girl moves to dads. Meets hot boy. Fall in love. change it up! make it spicy! Check your work. please. They ...
Dec 11, 2008 -
Re: An Apple and a Graveyard - Chap. 11
Im a huge fan of your writing. you need to write another chapter quickly! I love this.
Dec 9, 2008 -
Re: The Awakening (ch 2)
I absoulutley loooooooooooooove this! Keep writing! All i found was a misspelled word, "allowed" not "aloud". Send the next story to me if u can. I loooove it dont stop!
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: He Comes Before Night : Chapter One (edited
This was a good story. Keep writing i have nothing to comment on!
Nov 22, 2008 -
Re: Aet Lindling, Conqueror of All Dare Challenge Him Part I
This funny. I especially liked where you incorporated Edward Culllen from the Twilight Series. I thought you taught a good lesson that, one, be care full who you trust, for ...
Nov 19, 2008 -
Re: Poem
I thought this was very funny. You got bullied, then you bullied them. Ha.
Nov 19, 2008 -
Re: The Knot In A Broken Marriage
She sits upon her bed side, Wishing something would happen. may be her parents would die in a crash! Or their relationship would be swept away by the tide. She ...
Nov 19, 2008