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Hi! This was really funny! Did you make it up yourself? Here are some things I would do to make it better: "Rick crossed his arms, “You spit it back ...

Hi! wow... That is one very emotional poem. I think that the message you were trying to deliver to the reader was very clear. One thing that kind of confused ...

HI! I'm about to give you a..... REVIEW!!! Anyways, I liked your poem because of the vivid detail and how each part sort of melded into the other. One thing ...

HI! Your story had interesting themes, but those themes seem to clash too much, and make the story confusing. I think it'll be better if you focus on one point ...

I loved your poem! It was all over the place and I had basically no idea what was going on, but I could feel where you were going with it ...

Hi! I really loved your poem. But, since it's a review, I guess I'll give you a few suggestions. Firstly, I don't know what is going on, and my understanding ...

Hi! I liked your story, but I had NO IDEA I would read that stuff. I like that you didn't go crazy with the "romantic parts" and you stuck to ...

Hi! I liked your poem, but there's some things I would like to say since this is a review. To be completely honest, I kinda don't know what's going on. ...

Really loved your poem! I really liked the second to last stanza. The rhyme and rhythm was very catchy there. But, in other parts or your poem, the rhythm was ...

Hi! I loved your poem! There are a few things you could do to fix it though. Firstly, the first two lines are a bit confusing. It seems you forgot ...

Hi! I loved your poem! Love at first sight has always intrigued me. One thing I would suggest, is maybe, in the second to last line, you say, "My heart ...

I love how it rhymed! the rhythm was so catchy and the poem was short and sweet! I have basically no suggestions. One thing, the extra limerick at the end, ...

I really loved your poem! It was so touching and the detail was amazing. You knew exactly where to accent your poem. One thing I would fix though, is the ...

Hi! I really loved your poem! It was kind of sad that your parents hit you so much. I love how you showed the reader how the character was still ...

Hi VegasLights! I loved your poem, it was so touching and heartwarming. I can relate to it so well. I have almost no suggestions for this review, but here's one. ...