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londoncalling

  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: What You're Missing

    I loved the plot, it was fantastic. You clearly have a real talent for writing; the story really drew me in. But I'd like to see you to extend on ...

    Nov 11, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Opportunities

    I like it. I can feel a sense of personality developing in the characters, the dialogue is realistic and the story itself is quirky. My main critique would be I'd ...

    Nov 7, 2010


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