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Re: Short Poem: Head Man's Hill
the ryhmeing is good but the poem is to short realy short. Dont forget that you need mor explanations.
Oct 4, 2008 -
Re: Reaper Chapter 1
That was great. I didnt exactly fined any grammer problems but were are the other chapters? dont give up man.
Oct 4, 2008 -
Re: Grim Reaper
This gotta be awsome. I cant wait to read the story. But where are the other chapters?
Oct 4, 2008 -
Re: Somewhere Around Nothing
The reason why I wrote this poem it is that I want to know why do we have to die even when people beg THE LORD to save their loved ...
Oct 4, 2008 -
Re: [War]
Great...I really liked it.
Oct 3, 2008 -
Re: Math?
I couldnt stop laughing. It was funny. Awsome job!!!!!!!!!!
Oct 3, 2008 -
Re: Somewhere Around Nothing
Thankyou for all the comments guys. I am still trying to improve my writeing.
Oct 3, 2008 -
Re: Best Friends For Never
not bad
Sep 30, 2008