lost-my-mind

it's got good potential but jumps around too much so the reader cant get involved...I'll text you more hehehe

oh!! I'm so sorry I was trying to figure out the correct restriction thing but I'm no good as I have read adult books since I was eight....I have no ...

very nice I applaud you for your darkness and emotions very much the style I like and a lot of people haven't been getting it but you.....wow keep it up!

This is a really cool piece of writing, I literally got tears in my eyes as I read it. It is relate-able which is good but the flow needs a ...

I'm not sure where its going, so that's why I need help and I need an editor lol I'm totally useless at proof reading so any suggestions are much appreciated