love,juliet

First off, you've got the wrong form of "to" in two places. "Can all this be inside of you to" should be too, same with "and do you feel it ...

I agree with lilchoma. There are so many other wonderful words out there that it seems as though you did not care to fully describe your emotions. What's so hard? ...

Yes, I realized my mistake and deleted my other posts to save them for another day. I also wasn't really sure where to post it. It's more of a vignette ...

I actually like how it's not split up into stanzas; I think adding a lot of spacing would ruin the flow of the poem. I loved the image of "their ...

Meméré and her little purple car like to drive everywhere with me. Drive down the highway that might be longer than the way to Heaven. The one lined with graying ...