lucafitz

Cool story,

Good story, exciting action and you explained what had happened before, just a few things 1)"When I awoke drank water from my satchel", this needs to be When I awoke ...

How do i get review stars?

Thanks, the reason i used a Russian as a villian is because the image i have gotten from Media(Games and Movies) is that Russians can be 1)awesome people, with lots ...