luciditysNovelist

This is a really winsome poem. I can tell that Destiny is a lovely little kitten, and you have some delightful imagery in the form of lines like "cow spotted ...

This is certainly an interesting poem, however short. However, there are a few problems with it, structure and content-wise. In terms of structure, the biggest problem is that there isn't ...

This is a really sweet story, which is fitting for a story that has such a Christmas-like tone to it. The protagonists really do make sense as children; they're portrayed ...

This is definitely the sort of poem that I could imagine on the inside cover on a Disney Fairytales book or something similar. It's got some nice imagery, and the ...

While this story has a bit of a shaky start, I enjoyed it a great deal; your excellent characterizations and dialogue in particular were very fun to read. That being ...

This fanfic, like the universe it's based on, is downright cute. The tone is quirky and all-over-the-place, which helps it read like a good children's show. As far as I'm ...

I freely admit that I'm a sucker for urban fantasy (and your story has a lot of the elements from that genre of which I'm particularly fond). I am a ...

This story seems interesting at the core, and with some significant revisions, I think it could really shine. I like to begin reviews with things I enjoy about the narrative ...

I'd like to begin by saying that this story seems to have a lot of potential, but there will have to be a lot of work put in if you ...

I'd like to begin by saying that this is a really heartfelt poem - the emotion here is palpable and moving, which is excellent in this genre of poetry. It's ...

I'd like to start by saying that this is a downright charming story. Even with darker happenings, the slightly silly names and sheer joy of the fact that it's about ...

I think this story has a lot of interesting stuff about it. The two children grab my attention from the start, and your imagery is, for the most part, quite ...

I'd like to start off by saying that this is a really intriguing beginning for a story. The protagonist is fairly well-characterized (her struggle between suicidal urges and will to ...

I'll start off by saying that this story seems to have quite a lot of potential. The mystery is tantalizing, the characters are intriguing, and I'm in love with the ...