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  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Free Your Mind

    Would love some feedback. Its a tad long btw, sorry. :) “If you are not free to choose wrongly and irresponsibly, you are not free at all” Jacob Hornberger Free ...

    Oct 15, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Missing Autumn

    Hey Loveless I enjoyed reading the first part of your emotional story even though I'm not a big fan of the genre. A strong point is definitely your characterization, you ...

    Oct 15, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Falling Darkness

    Hey Smurf I thought your story was quite engaging right from the start. I also liked its light-hearted feel, eg. ripping off clothes to reveal silver wetsuits and power swimming. ...

    Oct 15, 2009


The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price