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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: DoaV (1st version): Prologue

    I liked that excerpt from your story, it had a good twist. And i like trying to figure out what kind of a person Yazra is, but she is very ...

    Jan 21, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: DoaV : Pilot section

    I love this story so far! It's a very good attention grabber, from the very first sentence, i knew i had to keep reading, cause i was wondering why she ...

    Jan 20, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The flower fields

    Hey, very very good story. Although, there were some things that did confuse me. For instance, at the beginning, you said that there were five people attending the meating, but ...

    Jan 5, 2008


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